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K. Seely
December 21, 2024
better than expected.
This one wasn’t really focused on sex and I enjoyed it immensely because of it. It was more focused on the character development which is lovely. Still like all short stories to me, it feels to short. Feels like it skips past her family meeting her real self, I.e. doesn’t have the depth of the family connection at the beginning.
Also the testing would have most definitely involved imaging to look for a tumor or other source for Shelley’s issue around hormones. But the story was enjoyable regardless. (I’m a physician so I tend to nitpick medical stuff, sorry).
I admit the images will make me uncomfortable sometimes, but that could just be my asexual self as they are well drawn. Anyway thank you for writing an enjoyable read.