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Gabrielle Docia
December 27, 2023
Awesome
For a self published author who wrote this book in nine days, it was pretty great.
For the bad: The book started off slow and had a few moments that I struggled to get through, it had some typos and run on sentences, and a good bit of repetition. I also would have loved to read more of Nox’s story. I feel like Amaris was the main focus and Nox is a side character when she should be more of the main focus and this is her story, but I hope to see more of Nox in future books. But who am I to judge, I’m no writer.
For the good: I love that we got to travel to more places in this book, meet new characters, and read the plot thicken. We were introduced to new monsters, morally gray characters, and got the answers to questions and mysteries we were left with in the first book. We also got to know our side characters a little better with more POV’s than just Nox and Amaris.
I usually skim through the spicy scenes so no comment there.
All in all I love the story, I can live with the typos, and I can’t wait to read the next book in the series and hope to read more from this author in the future as her writing grows.