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Jacquie Dore
February 17, 2026
Great story overall but it desperately needs better editing
I gave this book 4 stars because it truly does have great potential but in its current state, the editing makes it 3 stars, at best. This author always sucks me in with her story telling but the poor editing is, at points, too distracting to appreciate the story being told. Grammar, sentence structure, wrong word choice litters this book and drags down the overall quality. I love Harlow and Cat’s story and I even love how dark and deranged this book gets at points but it needs an overhaul of editing to make it the 5 star book it has the potential to be. I’ll continue to read this author’s work but I truly hope her next body of work is given the quality editing it deserves.